I really like the pencil work, great detail, but I think it comes off a little weird because their poses don't seem as dynamic, and the strain and tension from the sculpture doesn't translate very well, and that added to fact that where Thor is right now, makes it look like hes trying to steal a hug.
Thank you so much for your critique friend, I get what you say, but on the other hand I wanted them to be even matched, so their poses would have to be more tense than on the sculpture, on witch one of the figures has the upper hand. I guess that took a bit of the dynamics of it. But I agree that the aren´t quite flowing as I wanted them too. Again, thanks for the cool feedback!